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The Silk Scarf

Time: Durring the apartheid era
Place: Oriental plaza in Johannesburg

The Plot
The story is about Mrs Nebo a foreign minister to be.Mrs Nebo and Margret went out shopping,she sees this beautifull scarf in Mr Sakur's shop which matched with her garment that she bought a while ago.She found the scarf verry beautifull and attractive and decided to buy it.She offered Mr Sakur shop doesn't accept any cheques or credit cards,worst of all she didn't have enough cash on her.Mrs Nebo really wanted the scarf even though she didn't have enough cash on her she persaud the shop owner to take the cheque,but he kept saying no.Mrs Nebo started arguing even though she knows the rules of the shop.All she wanted was the scarf,all Mrs Nebo cared about is her feminine beauty,he that she couldn't bear the humiliation.The shopkeepers bought the scarf for Mrs Nebo.

Main CharactersThe main characters are Mrs Nebo and Mr Sakur.Mrs Nebo was of medium height,with heavy loins, and she was the wife of Clive Nebo, the man who was already designated as the Foreign Minister of the upcoming government. For Mrs Nebo, power and money were the only things that mattered and nothing else.She didn't care about what other people wanted, and this attitude bought her into disputes with a shopkeeper Mr Sakur.
Mr Sakur was a short gaunt-looking Indian man who by religion was a Muslim,and he still wore the antique braces he used to wear in the destroyed Pageview. This man was one of those people  who don't easily get intimidated, and this made him who he was in the Oriental Plaza. This man was a real democrat and believed in equal treatment of everyone.

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Through the Tunnel

Setting
The story takes place at wild beach and it is in the morning.

Main Character

Jerry Berry,a young English boy. He is 11 years old.he is the only child in the family and is and orphan.He is a good swimmer.He can speak English and French.

Plot

Jerry berry is a young English boy who went with his mother for vacation athe beach that they visited for many times in past years.Even though the beach location is not given, it's assumeed to be in a foreign country. They try to please others and not to impose so many demands.The widow mother is determined to be neither possessive nor lacking in devotion and jerry on the other hand in turn act from an unfailing impulse of contrition a sort of chivarly. Jerry joined the other boys in diving off a high point into the water for a while,the biggest boy dived in and does not come up. One morning seemed full of chattering boys.The next,the air and the surface of the water were empty. Through the heavy blue dark shapes could be seen moving and grouping, Jerry dives down and sees a black wall of rock looms at him when the boys come up each of them on the other side of the rock, he understood that they had swum through some holes in it. He could see nothing through the stinging salt water, but a blank rock. Jerry felt like a failure and shame yelling at the other boys first in English and then in French. Jerry is determined to be able to swim through the tunnel he rest a bit then see the local boys diving half a mile away, but he has no strength to move on diving again. He blurts out that he can stay under water for two to three minutes at least his mother told him not to do it again.

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